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@@ -16,17 +16,16 @@ bug fixes** ([1988/phillipps](1988/phillipps/README.md),
 [2001/anonymous](2001/anonymous/README.md), [2004/burley](2004/burley/README.md)
 and others) making entries not require `-traditional-cpp` (which are **very
 complicated fixes**), fixing entries to compile with clang, fixing entries to
-work with macOS (some of which are **very complicated** like
+work with macOS (some being **very complicated** like
 [1998/schweikh1](1998/schweikh1/README.md)), fixing code to work with both
-32-bit and 64-bit (e.g.  [2001/herrmann2](2001/herrmann2/README.md)) which *can
+32-bit/64-bit (e.g. [2001/herrmann2](2001/herrmann2/README.md)) which *can be*
-be* **quite complicated**, providing alternate code where useful/necessary,
+**quite complicated**, providing alternate code where useful/necessary, fixing
-fixing where possible dead links or removing them, typo/consistency fixes,
+where possible dead links or removing them, typo/consistency fixes, improving
-improving **ALL _Makefiles_** and writing the [sgit
+**ALL _Makefiles_** and writing [sgit](https://github.com/xexyl/sgit) that we
-tool](https://github.com/xexyl/sgit) that we installed locally and have used to
+installed locally and used to easily run `sed` on files in the repository to
-easily run `sed` on files in the repository to help build the website.  **Thank
+help build the website.  **Thank you very much** for your extensive efforts in
-you very much** for your extensive efforts in helping improve the IOCCC
+helping improve the IOCCC presentation of past IOCCC winners and making many
-presentation of past IOCCC winners and making many many past entries work with
+many past entries work with modern systems!
-modern systems!
 
 [Yusuke Endoh](https://www.ioccc.org/winners.html#Yusuke_Endoh) supplied a
 number of important bug fixes to a number of past IOCCC winners. Some of those