Fixes/clarifications in 2006/toledo[23]/index.html

2006/toledo2/README.md

@@ -48,8 +48,9 @@ To end the program hit ctrl-z.
 
 ## Alternate code:
 
-This version, as noted, should work for DOS/Windows. It uses non-standard
-functions in place of `read(2)` and `write(2)`.
+This version, as noted above, should work for DOS/Windows. It uses non-standard
+functions in place of `read(2)` and `write(2)`, and is based on the author's
+remarks.
 
 
 ### Alternate build:

2006/toledo2/index.html

@@ -432,8 +432,9 @@ does not seem to happen in macOS or linux in 2023.</p>
     RUN</code></pre>
 <p>To end the program hit ctrl-z.</p>
 <h2 id="alternate-code">Alternate code:</h2>
-<p>This version, as noted, should work for DOS/Windows. It uses non-standard
-functions in place of <code>read(2)</code> and <code>write(2)</code>.</p>
+<p>This version, as noted above, should work for DOS/Windows. It uses non-standard
+functions in place of <code>read(2)</code> and <code>write(2)</code>, and is based on the author’s
+remarks.</p>
 <h3 id="alternate-build">Alternate build:</h3>
 <pre><code>    make alt</code></pre>
 <h3 id="alternate-use">Alternate use:</h3>