From c8af4c694057e1b1a481a913295ef3e60f75cfc1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Cody Boone Ferguson <53008573+xexyl@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 2 Nov 2023 10:03:03 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Fix fix on 1984/anonymous

Somehow I ended up having the string on one line when the author had it
on two lines which is also something they liked.

This update should (unless the format of the alt code section needs to
change with discussion) be the final edit of README.md.
---
 1984/anonymous/README.md   | 17 ++++++++---------
 1984/anonymous/anonymous.c |  4 ++--
 thanks-for-fixes.md        |  7 ++++++-
 3 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1984/anonymous/README.md b/1984/anonymous/README.md
index 74ca6ac1c..08320a3cb 100644
--- a/1984/anonymous/README.md
+++ b/1984/anonymous/README.md
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ make all
 The original version of this entry was added, by request,
 in order to show the code that was turned into the
 [tattoo](https://web.archive.org/web/20070120220721/https://thomasscovell.com/tattoo.php),
-as the alternate code. See below in the tattoo side-by-side with the code.
+as the alternate code. See below for the tattoo side-by-side with the code.
 
 ### Alternate build:
 
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ The author was too embarrassed that they could write such trash, so I
 promised to protect their identity.  I will say that the author of this
 program has a well known connection with the C programming language.
 
-This program is a unique variation on the age old "Hello, world"
-program.  What reads like a read may be written like a write!
+This program is a unique variation on the age old "hello, world!" program.  What
+reads like a read may be written like a write!
 
 In 2005 someone by the name of Thomas Scovell got a tattoo of this entry. See
 his [web
@@ -77,12 +77,11 @@ Landon Curt Noll, the one who told the author about the tattoo, wrote back:
 
 ### Regrets:
 
-Landon Curt Noll wrote that the author, if they had to do it over again, regrets not
-making the program a one-liner and not moving the `int i` into an arg of main
-(so that the line would have started with main). On the other hand the author
-likes the "two line look" and the way `hell o` was split. :-) And they like the
-fact that it ends in a smily face: `;}`
-
+Landon Curt Noll wrote that the author regrets not making the program a
+one-liner and not moving the `int i` into an arg of main (so that the line would
+have started with main). On the other hand the author likes the "two line look"
+and the way `hell o` was split. :-) And they like the fact that it ends in a
+smily face: `;}`.
 
 ## Copyright and CC BY-SA 4.0 License:
 
diff --git a/1984/anonymous/anonymous.c b/1984/anonymous/anonymous.c
index 5451c40af..09bfaafcf 100644
--- a/1984/anonymous/anonymous.c
+++ b/1984/anonymous/anonymous.c
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
-int i;main(){for(;i["]<i;++i){--i;}"];read('-'-'-',i+++"hello, world!\\
-n",'/'/'/'));}read(j,i,p)void*i;{write(j/p+p,i---j,(int)i/(int)i);}
+int i;main(){for(;i["]<i;++i){--i;}"];read('-'-'-',i+++"hell\
+o, world!\n",'/'/'/'));}read(j,i,p)void*i;{write(j/p+p,i---j,(int)i/(int)i);}
diff --git a/thanks-for-fixes.md b/thanks-for-fixes.md
index 684be7eb0..8a0722043 100644
--- a/thanks-for-fixes.md
+++ b/thanks-for-fixes.md
@@ -133,13 +133,18 @@ The problem was to do with the way that the `read(2)` function was redefined.
 With macOS the second arg needs to be a `void *` and this also necessitated some
 casts to `int` (on the second arg) in the call to `write(2)` (in `read()`).
 
+Later Cody corrected the mistake where the `"hello, world!"` string was on one
+line rather than two lines which the author told us (Landon) that they liked.
+Thus now it is like the original where the first line ends with `"hell\` and
+the second line starts with `o, world!\n"`.
+
 By request, the original code is provided as
 [anonymous.alt.c](1984/anonymous/anonymous.alt.c) so that one can look at it and
 the famous tattoo:
 
 ![1984-anonymous-tattoo.jpg](1984/anonymous/1984-anonymous-tattoo.jpg)
 
-which was done in 2005 by [Thomas
+...which was done in 2005 by [Thomas
 Scovell](https://web.archive.org/web/20070120220721/https://thomasscovell.com/tattoo.php).