From 5e715f429e8b4445a59312a373d2604ceae99209 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Cody Boone Ferguson <53008573+xexyl@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 8 Oct 2023 04:10:30 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Fixes in 2006/sloane/README.md wrt alt/original

Instead of having the 'Alternate code' section be the original, rename
it to 'Original code'.

Changed note about alternate code at top to refer to original code.
---
 2006/sloane/README.md | 10 ++++------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2006/sloane/README.md b/2006/sloane/README.md
index 1bcff7119..7a8fa3bfa 100644
--- a/2006/sloane/README.md
+++ b/2006/sloane/README.md
@@ -17,10 +17,8 @@ make alt
 ./slone.alt
 ```
 
-An alternatively version of this entry exists so that one can actually see what
-is going on. This is also more ideal for those who are overstimulated by fast
-movements. See the alternate code section below.
-
+To see why we recommend the alternate version instead of the original version,
+see the [original code](#original-code) section.
 
 ## Try:
 
@@ -42,7 +40,7 @@ make CDEFINE="-DZ=0" clobber alt
 ./sloane.alt
 ```
 
-### Alternate code:
+### Original code:
 
 Should you wish to see the original without having to mess with the compiler
 line, try:
@@ -57,7 +55,7 @@ photosensitivity please be careful running this version and instead see the
 above!
 
 NOTE: again as above, to see what is going on, we recommend that you instead use
-the real alternate code which we described in the [To build](#to-build) and
+the alternate code which we described in the [To build](#to-build) and
 [try](#try) sections above.
 
 If however you wish to see the original, try:

From 4293bd923106c6ef5e6ecb2e85fc10f8e9c883ac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Cody Boone Ferguson <53008573+xexyl@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 8 Oct 2023 04:21:46 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Minor fixes in 2006/sloane/README.md

Make the alternate / original code details a bit clearer.
---
 2006/sloane/README.md | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2006/sloane/README.md b/2006/sloane/README.md
index 7a8fa3bfa..1f0e09e85 100644
--- a/2006/sloane/README.md
+++ b/2006/sloane/README.md
@@ -17,23 +17,23 @@ make alt
 ./slone.alt
 ```
 
-To see why we recommend the alternate version instead of the original version,
-see the [original code](#original-code) section.
 
 ## Try:
 
-The version we recommend that you use, in order to see what is happening with
-modern systems, and to not flash too quickly, which can be problematic for some
-people, can be configured to different speeds by way of the value used in
-`usleep()`. The default `-DZ=65000` but you can easily change it. To do so try:
+To see why we recommend the alternate version instead of the original version,
+see the [original code](#original-code) section. The alternate version, which we
+recommend that you use in order to see what is happening with modern systems,
+and to not flash too quickly, which can be problematic for some people, can be
+configured to different speeds by way of the value used in `usleep()`. The
+default is `-DZ=65000` but you can easily change it. To do so try:
 
 ```sh
 make CDEFINE="-DZ=70000" clobber alt
 ./sloane.alt
 ```
 
-If you wish to make it like the original, as if the below 'alternate code' was
-being used, you can do:
+If you wish to make it like the original, as if the below [Original
+code](#original-code) was being used, you can do:
 
 ```sh
 make CDEFINE="-DZ=0" clobber alt

From ba99529c525f6d1ca3d21fe3a80d95619bb857bc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Cody Boone Ferguson <53008573+xexyl@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 8 Oct 2023 04:27:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Further improvements to 2006/sloane/README.md

...wrt the original/alt code in the to build/to run/try sections.
---
 2006/sloane/README.md | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2006/sloane/README.md b/2006/sloane/README.md
index 1f0e09e85..be44c4aa9 100644
--- a/2006/sloane/README.md
+++ b/2006/sloane/README.md
@@ -17,15 +17,16 @@ make alt
 ./slone.alt
 ```
 
+To see why we recommend the alternate version instead of the original version,
+see the [original code](#original-code) section. 
 
 ## Try:
 
-To see why we recommend the alternate version instead of the original version,
-see the [original code](#original-code) section. The alternate version, which we
-recommend that you use in order to see what is happening with modern systems,
-and to not flash too quickly, which can be problematic for some people, can be
-configured to different speeds by way of the value used in `usleep()`. The
-default is `-DZ=65000` but you can easily change it. To do so try:
+This alternate version, which we recommend that you use in order to see what is
+happening with modern systems, and to not flash too quickly, which can be
+problematic for some people, can be configured to different speeds by way of the
+value used in `usleep()`. The default is `-DZ=65000` but you can easily change
+it. To do so try:
 
 ```sh
 make CDEFINE="-DZ=70000" clobber alt