Typo fixes in image details in 2024/endoh1

2024/endoh1/index.html

@@ -540,9 +540,9 @@ value before attempting to try a larger size such as <strong>512</strong> and be
 <p>Here is the fun saga of how the above image was rendered.</p>
 <blockquote>
 <p>The above image was started on <strong>Thu Sep 11 10:14:24 AM UTC 2025</strong>
-using 118 parallel jobs, then was suspended or 1 hour at the <code>Y=217</code> mark,
+using 118 parallel jobs, then was suspended for 1 hour at the <code>Y=217</code> mark,
 was interrupted accidentally at the <code>Y=254</code> mark. After a quick
-edit to the his version of the <code>try.sh</code> script so that it will not delete
+edit to his version of the <code>try.sh</code> script so that it will not delete
 existing work when restarted, he started again a minute later, at the
 <strong>Thu Sep 11 01:36:08 PM UTC 2025</strong>. The rendering was interrupted again
 at the <code>Y=972</code> mark for a couple of minutes, and interrupted again