More minor updates to thanks file

thanks-for-help.html

@@ -5166,23 +5166,23 @@ helped improve the presentation of their fellow IOCCC entries.</p>
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 <p>We call out the extensive contributions of <a href="authors.html#Cody_Boone_Ferguson">Cody Boone
 Ferguson</a> who is responsible for most of the
-improvements and fixes including <strong><em>many entries</em> that no longer worked</strong>
-(and other important bug fixes), often <strong>EXTREMELY HARD</strong> (for certain
-definitions of ‘<em>HARD</em>’ :-) ), like
+improvements and fixes, including <strong><em>many entries</em> that no longer worked</strong>,
+along with other important bug fixes, often <strong>EXTREMELY HARD</strong> (for certain
+definitions of ‘<em>HARD</em>’ :-) ) such as
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1988_phillipps">1988/phillipps</a>,
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1992_vern">1992/vern</a>,
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#2001_anonymous">2001/anonymous</a>,
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#2004_burley">2004/burley</a> and
-<a href="thanks-for-help.html#2005_giljade">2005/giljade</a>; making all entries, such as
+<a href="thanks-for-help.html#2005_giljade">2005/giljade</a>; fixing entries such as
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1985_sicherman">1985/sicherman</a> and
-<a href="thanks-for-help.html#1986_wall">1986/wall</a>, that
-required <code>-traditional-cpp</code>, to no longer require it; fixing
-entries like <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1991_dds">1991/dds</a> (or, as in the case of
+<a href="thanks-for-help.html#1986_wall">1986/wall</a> to
+no longer require <code>-traditional-cpp</code>; fixing
+entries like <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1991_dds">1991/dds</a> to work with <code>clang</code> (or, as in the case of
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1989_westley">1989/westley</a>, a true masterpiece in
-obfuscation, as much as possible) to work with <code>clang</code>; porting entries such as
+obfuscation, to work as much as possible); porting entries such as
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#1998_schweikh1">1998/schweikh1</a> to macOS; fixing code like
 <a href="thanks-for-help.html#2001_herrmann2">2001/herrmann2</a> to work in both 32-bit and
-64-bit; providing <a href="faq.html#alt_code">alternate code</a> where useful/necessary;
+64-bit environments; providing <a href="faq.html#alt_code">alternate code</a> where useful or necessary;
 improving all <code>Makefiles</code>; and writing scripts to greatly simplify running many
 of the entries.</p>
 <p>Cody also wrote the feature-rich <a href="https://github.com/xexyl/sgit">sgit</a> to easily
@@ -5203,8 +5203,8 @@ image responsiveness on smaller screens, along with some other improvements.</p>
 <p>Cody also wrote some of the <a href="bin/index.html">website scripts</a> and improved and
 bug fixed others.</p>
 <p><strong>THANK YOU VERY MUCH</strong> for your extensive efforts in helping improve the IOCCC
-presentation of past IOCCC entries and fixing almost all past entries for modern
-systems!</p>
+presentation of past IOCCC entries and fixing almost all entries that no
+longer worked, for modern systems!</p>
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