diff --git a/2004/anonymous/README.md b/2004/anonymous/README.md index f615e8ef0..87ea2f9dc 100644 --- a/2004/anonymous/README.md +++ b/2004/anonymous/README.md @@ -49,8 +49,7 @@ It was not until a sequel was called for that this was changed. If you want to read the first edition they reprinted it some years back: `The Hobbit Facsimile First Edition`. The details are also discussed in [History of -Middle-earth -(HoMe)](https://tolkiengateway.net/wiki/The_History_of_Middle-earth) VI, [The Return of the +Middle-earth (HoMe)](https://tolkiengateway.net/wiki/The_History_of_Middle-earth) VI, [The Return of the Shadow](https://tolkiengateway.net/wiki/The_Return_of_the_Shadow), part one of the history of [The Lord of the Rings](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lord_of_the_Rings) of a twelve volume set - as well as in [The @@ -73,8 +72,8 @@ earlier drafts sometimes the `û` had no diacritic but `h` after the `u` in it (and other times nothing). The real text is: ``` - Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul, ash nazg thrakatulûk, agh - burzum-ishi krimpatul. + Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul, + ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul. ``` which when translated from [Black @@ -85,7 +84,7 @@ Speech](https://www.glyphweb.com/arda/b/blackspeech.html): alt="The inscription, in the Black Speech of Mordor, on the One Ring" width=690 height=127> -into the Common Tongue reads: +into the [Common Tongue](https://www.glyphweb.com/arda/c/commontongue.html) reads: ``` One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, diff --git a/2004/anonymous/index.html b/2004/anonymous/index.html index 1c9291ded..6178a59e5 100644 --- a/2004/anonymous/index.html +++ b/2004/anonymous/index.html @@ -432,8 +432,7 @@ point that Bilbo slipped the ring on and Gollum saw him vanish and understood that he already found it. But there was no call of thief and no hatred of Bilbo. It was not until a sequel was called for that this was changed.

If you want to read the first edition they reprinted it some years back: The Hobbit Facsimile First Edition. The details are also discussed in History of -Middle-earth -(HoMe) VI, The Return of the +Middle-earth (HoMe) VI, The Return of the Shadow, part one of the history of The Lord of the Rings of a twelve volume set - as well as in The @@ -449,14 +448,14 @@ You’ll find out the source of the text above though you’ll see that there ar some circumflexes missing! That’s okay though due to I/O of the entry and in earlier drafts sometimes the û had no diacritic but h after the u in it (and other times nothing). The real text is:

-
    Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul, ash nazg thrakatulûk, agh
-    burzum-ishi krimpatul.
+
    Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul,
+    ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul.

which when translated from Black Speech:

The inscription, in the Black Speech of Mordor, on the One Ring

-

into the Common Tongue reads:

+

into the Common Tongue reads:

    One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
     One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them.

Author’s remarks: